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2nd review
and still not used to this stuff. I thought since no one reviewed, I would take a shot at it.

I might over rate and ramble while writing this review. Just warning...

Story (8/10)
Interesting way to start a BL love story. Some parts of the relationship goes too fast. Other parts could get a bit cliché...

Art (10/10)
I absolutely LOVE Junko's work. It makes you want to go AWWW with every page. Expressions are REALLY adorable.
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Character (7/10)
The seme and uke personalities is not so different from other yaoi manga.
(I realized the seme is younger than the uke)

Enjoyment (8/10)
It's yaoi, has GREAT art, and an interesting story. Why would I hate it?

Overall (8/10)
It was very cute... what else to say?


[Hopefully I wrote a better review this time]

TL;DR: 8/10

Copied from my Tumblr review

This story guys. I can’t… Gah, it feels good. I mean, there are some cliches here and there but it touches them so very gently.

Everyone looks the right age, the characters are built well and even when everything goes wrong I don’t feel like sticking my head in a bucket of water called my tears. Not that this is terrible, some would say that’s not entirely good either, I love being frustrated and to the point where I wish to throw my laptop at the wall. When it comes to rom-coms like this, this should always be feeling they ... try to achieve. Everything is set up so well… except the time break.

It’s a jarring break because it’s not transitioned properly. It took me a few page flips to find out how many years had ed from a certain plot point. Even with that singular, though rather big problem, I would definitely recommend it.

I picked up this manga because I am an immense fan of Junko and took a vow long ago to read all her works. Some of her works are amazing and I will never not love her art. This story, however... was very mediocre.

The story felt very rushed- it really could have been stretched out much longer. Even the individual events occurred so quickly, I would be jolted from my immersion. For example, one page was the couple kissing and the next was straight prawn. What? I was so surprised by how quickly things escalated. The characterization, while being mostly consistent, would occasionally be all ... over the place. I also wish Junko would design some more unique characters. These look good, but her characters to tend to look ridiculously similar to each other.

The central plot is a bit cliché, not necessarily bad, but is excecated poorly. The story constantly had me going "wait, what?". Despite all this, I did think it was a fun read and was able to get through it all in one sitting.