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After ERASED anime had come out, I decided to check the manga's author previous works to study his style, and his style is rather interesting.

Mouryou no Yurikago is a survival story with pretty strong horror element, teens are trapped in dark place with maze-like location. And it like The Minotaur Maze because it filled with monster. Will the teen survive? If yes, is it worth enough to read?

In my opinion, art it's really bad; bold lines, polygon-like face, and plain facial features. In term of shading the foreground and background also not fitted with the story theme which mean that it doesn't as scary as ... what you may expect.

When I start to read from the first episode, it just start by immediately throwing the 'victims' into the danger instead of introducing the story. And I really like this because it make me feel like I'm in the real situation. But as the story progress, it's full of cliche from the genre. But that's not bad as the story is short and compact with intense moments.

But what I like the most is the characters development; you can see madness throughout the story, and when the story start to explain everything we will see that (SPOILER!) the infection virus aren't make monster, human mind do it. One of the example is (SPOILER!) when one of the protagonist friends at the start of the story became monster because he fear to be rejected by the team if they see that he had been infected.
And at the same time, you will see changes in every characters in the story both positive and negative. Which make all heroes and villains are memorable.

To sum up, Mouryou no Yurikago is like a roller coaster. It thrill you as the survival horror would give you with rather predictable story. But the moment you ride the roller coaster is the best moments in your life. It's simple but touchy story.

And I wander that the author will keep ERASED as simple as this story.

tl;dr: A manga that’s really rough in most aspects but flows well enough that it’s fine as a braindead read.

This manga is about a group of high school students trying to escape from a capsizing cruise ship overrun by zombies. Overall I’d say that it’s not terrible, but it’s pretty lacking in of everything. Plot wise, the only overarching goal is to escape from the ship. Beyond that it comes down to the conflicts between engers. This is enough to hold up the manga to some degree as there are some interesting elements due to how they’re both in a sinking ship and facing ... a zombie crisis simultaneously. Still, all in all it didn’t really feel like it had good character stories either.

It didn’t feel like the cast was fleshed out properly and thus how they behave felt mostly random. There are attempts at giving characters depth but they’re all badly written and none of them work all that well. Thus, while the constant twists and extreme character moments were still interesting enough in the moment, in a broader sense the story was pretty hard to get invested in. Similarly, because characters weren’t fleshed out properly, without a good grasp of their personalities, backgrounds, and motivations, it was hard to get invested in them as well. As such, while the ending was okay, it didn’t hit all that hard.

The premise also makes no sense. The biggest issue is definitely that the way the ship capsized is by completely flipping over. At this point the vast majority of the ship is underwater. However, despite that it still takes over a day for the ship to actually sink. I am not an expert on ships, but that just seems kind of ridiculous. Even if the entire ship was designed to be completely air tight for some reason, this would still mean that an external force strong enough to completely flip over the ship didn’t do enough damage to it to break its airtightness. I’m able to pretty easily look past issues in realism if it feels like they’re necessary for the story being told, but this felt completely pointless. The way things play out in the ship does not make sense a lot of the time if the ship is upside down. It’s basically drawn and written as if it was upright the vast majority of the time.

There are a lot of other issues as well, such as how the plot treats simply escaping from the bottom of the ship, which is the only part above the water, as the end goal. No thought is given at all to what they’d do after that, and ultimately it is treated as if it was trivial. But that doesn’t make sense at all within the context of why the ship capsized in the first place. These inconsistencies are glaring enough that they kind make the plot overall feel not worth taking seriously. This is very much a work that you need to shut off your brain and just go with the flow of in order to enjoy.

The art was pretty rough and character designs were kind of boring but the style fit the story well enough and it worked out okay. The fan translation is also somewhat rough but should be simple enough to understand.

This was terrible, which surprised me after very decent Hoozuki no Shima. It’s been long since I flipped through pages on pure rage to tear a work apart properly in a review.

Among the many factors that make you question your choice of hobby while reading this manga the atrocious hamfisted fanservice is the real star. It has no contenders in making you want to hit your head on the table from the complex combination of ire, cringe and lameness overflow. I am understanding of fanservice in manga, really, truly, I promise, but this time it got to me and it got to me bad. And ... I think it’s not my fault. One of the first things you see in Mouryou no Yurikago, even before learning anything about the story or characters, is a schoolgirl pissing herself with fear, attention on her crotch and labia majora, and her crotch, and her labia majora, and more crotch… – hope you catch my drift. The girl is made to look very earnest in being scared. Every girl in this manga is made to look very earnest, to provide tits'n'ass nonstop and be dumb as a brick (sorry, bricks). The level of grace with which this is handled is, say, a blind girl is nearly raped, but manages to escape by hurting her attacker in a living hell situation – this scene is used to make something like a pin-up of her for a colored page, her peach-like ass visible through a torn skirt and breasts outlined through a wet shirt. Or a twisted “bad” girl dies and her last thoughts are about forgetting to put on panties. No, sadly it’s not funny in the context. And all the female characters are like that, there’re about 5 pages combined in all the manga where they are not extremely irritating, 3 of those pages dedicated to the female MC swimming silently. The author also seems to have a thing for the “golden shower” (women piss a lot in this manga, boys don’t at all though, lol). It’s not erotic, it’s not motivated, it doesn’t have a good flow, it’s just “look tits” and half of the cast turned into trash. Damn this stuff to the bottom of the ocean.

The male cast fares somewhat better, since they at least don’t show their dongs left and right and some of the tropey personalities initially had potential. At the beginning we’re introduced to a stoic type that pushes people away, to a caring womanizer, to a psychopathic “effectiveness” guy still on the “good” side of dnd alignement and to a wheelchair guy with the moral dilemma of fighting for his life vs. being a burden. But later on many of these make 180 turns out of nowhere, some (nearly all) end up being wasted. There’s also a bunch of “weird foreigners”, including a sword-wielding Russian religious fundamentalist without any context or explanation.

Speaking about the context, when the backstories start to roll out, it doesn’t get better – it gets worse, for heaven’s sake, and that’s rare in fiction. The author shoehorns wild things in the cast, with children being also specialists – they are circus acrobats, “my relative built this ship” walking asspulls, tormented prodigies and language geniuses and I’ve already mentioned the psychopathic guy. Not to mention that their school trip involved going on a cruise liner to dig some ditches in Africa – yeah, don’t ask, don’t let me think about the logic and consistency in Mouryou no Yurikago anymore, please, I’ll conf… Sorry, got off-track. And the schoolkids also talk about each other in of “he won’t die, he isn’t that sort of guy”. Alltogether it holds water as well as the sinking ship they’re on.

You could've named the plot of Mouryou no Yurikago ambitious, if not for the huge amount of “hell on a sinking ship” movies filmed around early 2000-s, which this manga tries to copy, just with a Japanese schoolkids cast. And there’s a whole genre of similar “trapped on a spaceship with monsters” fiction. Manga has a lot of good catastrophe survival stories too. This – this is not a good survival story or a good sinking ship story, because it's not a good story at all. This manga is long enough and not amateur enough to have brighter moments, of course, but the overall quality of writing is catastrophic. One good thing I can say about it is that it doesn’t stray too much - no sudden alien invasions, no excessive breaking of the 4th wall.

I guess, two other things I can call remarkable is the sheer tonal deafness of the author and the art. The tone deafness is simply impressive. The art made at least my angry fast reading possible, since it’s easy to understand and detailed enough. It reminds me of good shounen art with characters designed in a few recognizable features and honest immersive backgrounds that do a fine job of being backgrounds, but not much else, and maybe also Ibara no Ou a little. The debris is drawn very nicely. Though, despite the events taking place on an overturned sinking liner, I can’t say that there were many memorable places where the landscape reigned the atmosphere as a character on its own (which manga is very capable of and which totally should happen in such a setting). So the art is good, yeah, but not good enough by far to redeem everything else.

I recommend not wasting your time and energy on this thoroughly disappointing work. Too many things are wrong with it. Even if you think you’re fine with poorly placed fanservice, crippling plot problems – in everything: progression, character development, logic, backstories – will remain and bother you in the end. Really, there’re better things to read out there. Wade in only if your very survival depends on finding a new survival manga or you are such a dedicated enthusiast of the piss fetish that you have ran out of all and every work containing it out there.